I love this story, and I have a suggestion. Back when you were drawing it, all the characters were visually very well differentiated, and each had their own distinct appearance. I feel that the new artist stylizes a bit more, and honestly it’s hard to tell some of the young women characters apart visually when they’re not all visible. The current scene in the library, I don’t know who’s in conversation. Perhaps either the artist could distinguish more, or you as writer could clue us? Thx!
I love this story, and I have a suggestion. Back when you were drawing it, all the characters were visually very well differentiated, and each had their own distinct appearance. I feel that the new artist stylizes a bit more, and honestly it’s hard to tell some of the young women characters apart visually when they’re not all visible. The current scene in the library, I don’t know who’s in conversation. Perhaps either the artist could distinguish more, or you as writer could clue us? Thx!
Very much noted, thanks for the suggestion. And in case you’re still wondering, that’s Rona in the library with Zorro.